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From: mpsilvertone@yahoo.com (HarryLime)
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Subject: Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery
Date: Mon, 3 Feb 2025 19:15:50 +0000
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On Mon, 3 Feb 2025 10:34:49 +0000, W.Dockery wrote:

> On Sun, 2 Feb 2025 14:27:25 +0000, HarryLime wrote:
>
>> On Sun, 2 Feb 2025 14:08:38 +0000, Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>>
>>>>> I Met A Girl
>>>>>
>>>>> I met a girl
>>
>> By Will Dockery
>>
>>>>> She was a little freckled girl
>>>>> from out of
>>>>> my high school past.
>>>>> At this point I kissed her
>>>>> and put my finger to her hole.
>>
>> Edited for effect.
>
> Edited for misrepresentation, you mean.

Not at all.  You come across as a major asshole in both versions.

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