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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Coil / Will Dockery
Date: Mon, 17 Mar 2025 22:43:57 +0000
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On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:40:45 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> Ping: George Dance, this thread has good examples of the quoting
>> situation and ongoing problem:
>
>>> Coil
>>>
>>> This coil of pain
>>> memory burns
>>> with flashing image
>>> and haunting misses.
>>>
>>> Distinct dream vision
>>> mixed up with consciousness
>>> train seems right on top of me
>>> conductor has an agenda.
>>>
>>> Only the gods see beyond this veil
>>> I've seen those eyes
>>> red blazing and shaking.
>>>
>>> No time to think,
>>> no desire to.
>>>
>>> There seems to be a wide awake
>>> slow ride
>>> consciousness carries
>>> stretches through these years
>>> these days... this minute.
>>>
>>> As if the night could purify
>>> rather than corrupt
>>> my reptilian hands
>>> my repetition in signs.
>>>
>>> -Will Dockery  (2003)
>>>
>>> {Revised and updated 2025)
>
>> HTH and HAND.
>
> What problem?

The quoting and broken thread problems, which are now mostly resolved.

Thanks again, MC.

😏