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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Coil. by Will Dockery
Date: Wed, 19 Mar 2025 10:33:08 +0000
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On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 22:03:51 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>> MummyChunk wrote:
>>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>
>>> Coil
>>>
>>> This coil of pain
>>> memory burns
>>> with flashing image
>>> and haunting misses.
>>>
>>> Distinct dream vision
>>> mixed up with consciousness
>>> train seems right on top of me
>>> conductor has an agenda.
>>>
>>> Only the gods see beyond this veil
>>> I've seen those eyes
>>> red blazing and shaking.
>>>
>>> No time to think,
>>> no desire to.
>>>
>>> There seems to be a wide awake
>>> slow ride
>>> consciousness carries
>>> stretches through these years
>>> these days... this minute.
>>>
>>> As if the night could purify
>>> rather than corrupt
>>> my reptilian hands
>>> my repetition in signs.
>>>
>>> -Will Dockery  (2003)
>>>
>>> {Revised and updated 2025)
>>
>
>> Trying to understand your problem.  But if it is related to this - since
>> this was a post reply to
>> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?t=631491687 and you did not
>> quote, then the text of the very 1st post of that thread -
>> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739 should have
>> been automatically quoted when it went out to usenet and the reference
>> message ID should have been the same (the very 1st post of that thread)
>
> Yes, that is exactly what happened.
>
> If you look at your message (message id: Message-ID:
> <lYCdnceHaIGR7EX6nZ2dnZfqn_idnZ2d@giganews.com>) that you posted:
> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=685772091#685772091
>
> it quoted the 1st post
> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739 of this
> thread automatically http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?t=631491687
> when it went to USENET since you did not quote and it referenced that
> message as well: (References: <vr69n1776c4sf8@corp.supernews.com>)
>
> Seems as if it functioned just as the admin said it should.
>
>
> This is a response to the post seen at:
> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739

Good morning again MC, and thanks again for the information.

😏