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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: February / George Dance
Date: Sun, 8 Dec 2024 15:34:58 +0000
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Zod wrote:

> George J. Dance wrote:
>> On Feb 9, 6:39 pm, On The Highways and Bi-Ways God Built
>> <GodBuilt1...@Yahoo.com> wrote:
>>> In article
>>> <a7217e97-3360-4047-9c0a-d80c87ae3...@j1g2000yqi.googlegroups.com>,
>>> George J. Dance says...
>>
>>> >February
>>>
>>> >Unnoticed dreams:
>>> >ocean waves in winter,
>>> >the curve of your cheek.
>>>
>>> ocean waves in winter
>>> the curve of your cheek
>>> Unnoticed dreams
>>>
>>> the curve of your cheek
>>> Unnoticed dreams
>>> ocean waves in winter
>>>
>>> noticed seems
>>> the ocean waves of Doris DeWinter
>>> the curve of your beak
>>>
>>> Focused beams
>>> location slaves in summer
>>> the verve of your seeking
>>>
>> Errr ... interesting. What do you call it?
>>> hmmm... kinda like Tinker Toys...or Legos.
>>>
>>> or a Mr. Potato Head.
>>>
>> Maybe one of those could be your title.
>>> man, this poetry shit is EASY!!!
>>>
>> I don't find that. But I suppose readers will be as interested in your
>> opinion as mine.
>
> And what did we get...?
>
> Wait for it...
>
> More crickets... ha ha.

Good riddance to the troll thugs.