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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Lay Black Night. by Will dockery
Date: Thu, 9 Jan 2025 09:42:11 +0000
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General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> William Price wrote:
>
>>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>>>>
>>>>   > Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>   > Lay Black Night.
>>>>   >
>>>>   > A mystery,
>>>>   > a little sparkle together.
>>>>   > Slab of incredible Gemini events,
>>>>   > Twin Ace little pilot lines
>>>>   > seen by one ofr more people.
>>>>   >
>>>>   > Just plain invent Ace
>>>>   > from the facts as we know them.
>>>>   > Last little inner words:
>>>>   > "two shots in the coffee."
>>>>   > "Lay Black Night."
>>>>   >
>>>>   > Lay the hop out
>>>>   > missing scads of detail.
>>>>   > They made more than one of these things,
>>>>   > these paperbacks.
>>>>   >
>>>>   > Being King Leer's mountain goddess
>>>>   > discuss or explain, it hurts,
>>>>   > freeze the action,
>>>>   > let it fly on.
>>>>   >
>>>>   > Deletion of any truth,
>>>>   > natural hit clearly at Soul Door.
>>>>   > Half dozen directions
>>>>   > seperate agendas.
>>>>   >
>>>>   > Loved by few,
>>>>   > Ace by many seems dead.
>>>>   >
>>>>   > -Will Dockery  9-4-03
>>>>
>>>> Lay Black Night
>>>>
>>>> A mystery,
>>>> a little sparkle together.
>>>> Slab of incredible Gemini events,
>>>> Twin Ace little pilot lines
>>>> seen by one or more people.
>>>>
>>>> Just plain invent Ace
>>>> from the facts as we know them.
>>>> Last little inner words:
>>>> "two shots in the coffee."
>>>> "Lay Black Night."
>>>>
>>>> Lay the hop out
>>>> missing scads of detail.
>>>> They made more than one of these things,
>>>> these paperbacks.
>>>>
>>>> Being King Leer's mountain goddess
>>>> discuss or explain, it hurts,
>>>> freeze the action,
>>>> let it fly on.
>>>>
>>>> Deletion of any truth,
>>>> natural hit clearly at Soul Door.
>>>> Half dozen directions
>>>> separate agendas.
>>>>
>>>> Loved by few,
>>>> Ace by many seems dead.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery  9-4-03
>>>>
>>>> Another nearly forgotten poem from the archives.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>  >
>>>  >
>>> More Dockery archives -
>
>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/on-mulberry-drive.html?m=1
>
> Good read ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Good morning again Zod, I hope your Florida vacation is going well.