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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Date: Wed, 21 Aug 2024 09:53:41 +0000
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General-Zod wrote:
>
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>> "General Zod"  wrote in message
>>>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>>>>  Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>>>> after the parade.
>>>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> They pass and fade
>>>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On this really old wall
>>>>>> good view from up here.
>>>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> -Will Dockery
>
>>>>>> Is this a re-write?
>
>>>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for
>>>> reading and commenting, my friend.
>
>>> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....
>
>> As another day dawns, I tend to agree.
>
>
> Right on...

Thanks again.