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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Coil. / Will Dockery
Date: Fri, 4 Apr 2025 18:50:16 +0000
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MummyChunk wrote:

>> Ironywaves wrote:
>
>> Coil
>>
>> This coil of pain
>> memory burns
>> with flashing image
>> and haunting misses.
>>
>> Distinct dream vision
>> mixed up with consciousness
>> train seems right on top of me
>> conductor has an agenda.
>>
>> Only the Gods see beyond this veil
>> I saw those eyes
>> red blazing and shaking.
>>
>> No time to think,
>> no desire to.
>>
>> There seems to be a wide awake
>> slow ride
>> consciousness carries
>> stretches through these years
>> these days... this minute.
>>
>> As if the night could purify
>> rather than corrupt
>> my reptilian hands
>> my repetition in signs.
>>
>> -Will Dockery (2003)
>
> Here is a Will Dockery gem
>
>
> This is a response to the post seen at:
> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739

Good afternoon and thanks again for reading and commenting.

😏