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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Jo Cairo / a poem by Will Dockery
Date: Tue, 4 Feb 2025 09:28:04 +0000
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On Fri, 31 Jan 2025 1:10:19 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:

>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>
>> Jo Cairo
>>
>> White candy bars
>> and whistling car sounds
>> on a hill in the park from Lorrain's
>> she comes whimpering on the grass
>> a bedtime story
>> moments after contemplating the rain.
>>
>> And blonde blue jeans
>> by a babbling stream
>> lady cabdriver just like saxo fountain
>> didn't have the recollection after
>> eating her p***y for a ride
>> of her name.
>>
>> There'd been a murder in the park
>> and I was paranoid
>> walking across from Lorrain's street
>> through the park
>> to the street on the other side
>> to her boarding house home.
>>
>> The rain clouds grew darker
>> pangs of regret
>> where was that roller-skating copper-eyed
>> with her smile
>> and long blonde hair tied back w/ headband
>> and a little groan as she came.
>>
>> -Will Dockery 5-5-83
>> From the Red Zeros chapbook
>> https://www.pinterest.com/pin/357684395381867399/
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>  Bookmarked, I've been looking for this one.
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>  Thanks !
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> Thanks for reading and commenting, MC.
>
> Please excuse the language, I was younger and more tough edged in 1983.
>
>  😏
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>
> Ever thought about sharing some of your story with those of us that
> haven't
> been in these groups as long?  Personally, would be an interesting read
> for me.

We're gradually getting there, best in mind that only my remembrances
are accurate, other interpretations can tend to negatively misrepresent
details that are difficult enough to honestly present in poetry as it
is.

And so it goes.

> This is a response to the post seen at:
> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=659015510#659015510

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