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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: 17 Poems / Will Dockery
Date: Sun, 15 Dec 2024 19:09:05 +0000
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Victor H. wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> "Akmar Raggyhead"  wrote in message
>>> news:sp2atatjpl52ngo2ajq7d0v9rm8b107aqd@4ax.com...
>>>> "Will Dockery"
>>> <will_dockery@outlook.com> wrote:
>
>>>>Poem Twelve in the "17 Poems" series:
>>>>
>>>>Soft Shadows
>>>>
>>>>Soft shadows of two men
>>>>move and evolve.
>>>>
>>>>Commercialism is the word
>>>>a fact of life
>>>>sometimes very pleasant.
>>>>
>>>>I've been here before
>>>>I will be here again.
>>>>
>>>>Roger that.
>>>>
>>>>Soft sound from the piano below
>>>>shifts and flows
>>>>from this dizzy height.
>>>>
>>>>It's hard to see anything
>>>>in the effort to get everything.
>>>>
>>>>-Will Dockery
>>>>
>>>> >As always, useful comments & constructive criticism welcomed, trolls
>>>> will
>>>> >be
>>>> >ignored.
>>>>
>>>> i dont like that one
>
>> Oh well, maybe the next poem.
>
>
> Ha ha...!

Good afternoon, Zod.

😏