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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery
Date: Wed, 12 Feb 2025 15:01:31 +0000
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HarryLime wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> On Sun, 9 Feb 2025 14:27:25 +0000, HarryLime wrote:
>>> On Sun, 9 Feb 2025 14:08:38 +0000, Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>>>> I Met A Girl
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I met a girl
>>>
>>> By Will Dockery
>>>
>>>>>> She was a little freckled girl
>>>>>> from out of
>>>>>> my high school past.
>>>>>> At this point I kissed her
>>>>>> and put my finger to her hole.
>>>
>>> Edited for effect.
>>
>> Edited for misrepresentation, you mean.
>
> Not at all.  You come across as a major asshole in both versions.
>
> --

In your opinion, you forgot to add.

HTH and HAND.