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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Spring Rains, by Zod
Date: Tue, 17 Dec 2024 22:10:00 +0000
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General-Zod wrote:
>
> Spring Rains
>
> Bathing
> in the gentle rain,
> naked and free.
>
> Awash with
> sensation,
> chilling me.
>
> The humming
> sound of the
> rain dance.
>
> A lament
> in trance.
>
> --Zod

Another good one.