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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: A Convolution in Her / Will Dockery
Date: Fri, 4 Apr 2025 15:36:52 +0000
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General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> "Bill Evans"  wrote in message
>>> news:news.Thu.20151231.022821.PST.1374@mariposabill.com...
>>>> "Will Dockery" <will_dockery@outlook.com> posted the final
>>> version of "The Ride (Combat Zone).
>
>>> Will, I'm not sufficiently educated or experienced in giving
>>> a useful critique of this poem; I'll bet Mike would do a
>>> good job of that.
>
>>> But it would help me if you could explain a couple of
>>> things.  Asking them will make me look like a silly fool,
>>> but I'm down with that.
>
>>> I look at "Rastas" and think, huh?  Does this refer to
>>> Rastafarians, those mild-mannered pot-smoking laid-back
>>> folks from Jamaica?  Can that be right?  What am I missing?
>
>>> And what is meant by "black" in "black pigs of poetry"?
>
>> I wonder whatever happened to Bill Evans?
>
>
> I dunno

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