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Subject: Re: Coil / Will Dockery
From: will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (Will-Dockery)
Date: Sat, 05 Apr 2025 15:19:38 -0400
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> MummyChunk wrote:
> 
>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>> 
>>> MummyChunk wrote:
>>> 
>>>> W.Dockery wrote:
>>>> On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> Miguel Sucio wrote:
>>>>> MummyChunk wrote:
>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Coil
>>>>> 
>>>>> This coil of pain
>>>>> memory burns
>>>>> with flashing image
>>>>> and haunting misses.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Distinct dream vision
>>>>> mixed up with consciousness
>>>>> train seems right on top of me
>>>>> conductor has an agenda.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Only the gods see beyond this veil
>>>>> I saw those eyes
>>>>> red blazing and shaking.
>>>>> 
>>>>> No time to think,
>>>>> no desire to.
>>>>> 
>>>>> There seems to be a wide awake
>>>>> slow ride
>>>>> conciousness carries
>>>>> stretches through these years
>>>>> these days... this minute.
>>>>> 
>>>>> As if the night could purify
>>>>> rather than corrupt
>>>>> my reptilian hands
>>>>> my repetition is signs.
>>>>> 
>>>>> -Will Dockery  (2003)
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Here is a Will Dockery gem
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> What makes it a gem?  Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
>>>>> a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc
>>>>> 
>>>>> I just enjoyed reading it!
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.
>>>> 
>>>> 😏
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> This is a response to the post seen at:
>>>>> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739
>>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Good afternoon to you too.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Hello again.
>> 
>> 😏
> 
> 
> 
> Hi there 🥂




Good afternoon, MC

😏 


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