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Subject: Re: yippee-kay-yay notes
Date: Wed, 16 Oct 2024 21:24:33 +0000
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On Thu, 3 Oct 2024 17:12:52 +0000, W.Dockery wrote:

> On Thu, 3 Oct 2024 14:10:57 +0000, cheesetray wrote:
>
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>  > cheesetray wrote:
>>  > polished version
>>  >
>>  >
>>  > the inventors: a bare redemption
>>  > "yippee-ki-yay" notes
>>  > from a blue napkin
>>  > dedicated to bob
>>  > zimmerman, bella, and life
>>  > AKA: Tangled UP in Poop
>>  >
>>  >
>>  >
>>  > children of great men
>>  > knowing full well
>>  > the values
>>  > of hard-won liberties
>>  > fought and died for
>>  > by the promised
>>  > courageous cousins
>>  > abraham's distant stars
>>  > kith and kin
>>  > of sarah's isaac
>>  > gifted by laughter
>>  > ishmael, the other
>>  > wild and strange
>>  > sons of keturah
>>  > constructed to be mighty
>>  > gentle jacob
>>  > who sweetly stirs the stew
>>  > even red and savage
>>  > brother esau
>>  > now all clean men
>>  > of the covenant, keepers
>>  > of their first father's
>>  > sacred oath
>>  >
>>  > 2000 years it took
>>  > to get back here
>>  > it was given
>>  > never to be compromised
>>  > by hesitation or fear
>>  > soul siblings, descendants
>>  > and compatriots
>>  > deserving of honor
>>  > and praise
>>  > born to retake
>>  > and come to possess
>>  > this lofty empire
>>  > of the new moon
>>  > a reserved republic
>>  > of their very own
>>  > dispersed nation shielded
>>  > from all shame, under
>>  > a shining name
>>  >
>>  > in her recent
>>  > most happy world
>>  > suddenly he knocks
>>  >
>>  > angels once asleep
>>  > buried beneath
>>  > billions of years
>>  > of driven construction
>>  > are now terrified
>>  > and becoming...
>>  > furiously, wide awake
>>  > knowing full well
>>  > in their upcoming
>>  > reckless acts
>>  > of violent abandon
>>  > that they will come
>>  > to own it
>>  >
>>  > they have been
>>  > selected to receive
>>  > and will win over
>>  > this tired servant
>>  >
>>  > the trembling spiritus
>>  > runs and scatters
>>  > landing twice-baked
>>  > abandoned looks
>>  > but lady lazarus will return
>>  > after getting some help
>>  > of her own
>>  >
>>  > she recollects
>>  > then realizes, she has
>>  > but one shot
>>  > for a first impression
>>  > must send good cheer
>>  > but also sees, eyes
>>  > wide open
>>  > only to be scared stiff
>>  > into walking
>>  > like an egyptian
>>  > onto the sands...
>>  > of the moon
>>  >
>>  > she is half
>>  > african princess
>>  > half female slave
>>  > daughter of voodoo
>>  > doctors and rambam
>>  > she will become
>>  > a dirty nun
>>  >
>>  > they have been born again
>>  > and carried off
>>  > into fragmented space
>>  > through the sculpted arms
>>  > of armored knights
>>  > from jacob's round table
>>  > sentinels on the watch
>>  > always looking out
>>  > to protect and serve
>>  > those sworn in by red
>>  > and black pledges
>>  > keepers of the holy grail
>>  >
>>  > children now grown
>>  > are playing
>>  > in private movie theatres
>>  > and luxurious
>>  > fancy white schoolyards
>>  > frequenting supermarkets
>>  > on another level
>>  >
>>  > they are shooting
>>  > cosmic guns
>>  > with magic bullets
>>  > igniting freedom's fireworks
>>  > fashioned from mendeleev's
>>  > annexed table, sporting
>>  > a cornucopia
>>  > of fanciful and fantastical
>>  > state-of-the-art bonds
>>  > inherited by a new
>>  > and fitting
>>  > most worthy stock
>>  >
>>  > this wandering brood
>>  > of brave-hearted children
>>  > finally freed, are found
>>  > morbidly celebrating
>>  > their own staccatoed suicides
>>  > and the ensuant
>>  > desired piled death
>>  > of discrete, individuated
>>  > independent flesh
>>  >
>>  > it is replaced
>>  > through perpetual rebirth
>>  > with a planted rejoinder
>>  > each first fettered in its own
>>  > iron graveyard prison
>>  > for seminal generations
>>  > of the ghosts
>>  > of dead citizens
>>  > those helping
>>  > their hosting homelands
>>  >
>>  > a phantom protection
>>  > of the peoples' heritage
>>  > proud recorded lineage
>>  > of all participants
>>  > in this best
>>  > ever-fixd marriage
>>  > of language, and thought
>>  > mental manifestations
>>  > of only the truest minds
>>  > but who, if anyone
>>  > will capture the flag?
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