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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: PPB: October / George J. Dance
Date: Wed, 13 Nov 2024 02:16:44 +0000
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On Sun, 20 Oct 2024 18:59:34 +0000, General-Zod wrote:

> On Sun, 20 Oct 2024 13:26:24 +0000, George J. Dance wrote:
>
>> On Sun, 20 Oct 2024 13:06:57 +0000, Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>>> On Sat, 19 Oct 2024 19:03:01 +0000, George J. Dance wrote:
>>>
>>>> Saturday's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
>>>> October, by George J. Dance
>>>>
>>>> How soon leaves fall
>>>> [...]
>>>>
>>>> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2024/10/october-george-j-dance.html
>>>>
>>>> #pennyspoems
>>>
>>> Good one, George.
>>
>> Thanks, Will. This is from my "calendar" of tercets - I've played around
>> with one of the color words, and regularized the punctuation (both good
>> reasons for posting a new version), but otherwise it's the same poem.
>>
>> Back when I wrote the calendar, I posted five of the tercets on the blog
>> (a sign that the other 7 weren't finished). Then this year, after I
>> blogged the revised version of "February", I had another poet tell me
>> that I should write a calendar. So I decided to get the others on as
>> well. This brings me to ten of the 12.
> Agree....
>
> Quite lovely....!
>
> --

Agreed, good poem.