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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Saint Augustine Blues #6 / Will Dockery
Date: Fri, 31 Jan 2025 14:04:17 +0000
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General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> Zod wrote:
>
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>> From "Saint Augustine Blues"
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>>
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall,
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery
>>>>
>>>> (From the "Saint Augustine Blues" poem series by Will Dockery. Others to
>>>> follow, comment & critique welcome, as I retool these for the new era.)
>
>>> Again, fantastic job....!
>
>> Good evening, thanks again.
>
>
> Good day
>
> How'd do..?

Doing good, Zod.

Hope all is well with you and yours in Florida.

😏