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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Title: "On Mulberry Drive" (Draft) Creators: Will Dockery and Brian
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On Sat, 22 Feb 2025 22:06:51 +0000, Cujo DeSockpuppet wrote:

> George J. Dance@novabbs.com (George J. Dance) wrote in
> news:22f1ef6b43af60d8dff78636279557e8@www.novabbs.com:
>
>> On Sat, 22 Feb 2025 18:20:35 +0000, Will-Dockery wrote:
>>> George Dance wrote:
>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>> Title:
>>>> "On Mulberry Drive" (Draft)
>>>> Creators:
>>>> Will Dockery and Brian Mallard
>>>>
>>>> https://youtube.com/watch?v=kE1pZ14gy4c&si=0z41kbwl6Sies98N
>>>
>>>
>>> On Fri, 21 Feb 2025 21:37:49 +0000, George J. Dance wrote:
>>>
>>>> On Thu, 27 Jun 2024 2:41:41 +0000, Will-Dockery wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> On Mulberry Drive
>>>>>
>>>>> On Mulberry Drive
>>>>> walking in the Spring rain.
>>>>> Except for signs of a driveway
>>>>> nothing else remains.
>>>>> They took it all away
>>>>> the house and the hill.
>>>>> That spot we shared in '78
>>>>> all the love and thrills.
>>>>>
>>>>> Oblivion is coming
>>>>> it's written in the stone.
>>>>> It really starts out
>>>>> on the day that you're born.
>>>>> Live every second
>>>>> dance what you've captured.
>>>>> Shadowville Mythos...
>>>>> is on the last chapter.
>>>>>
>>>>> On Mulberry Drive
>>>>> on another mystery play.
>>>>> Almost fifty years ago
>>>>> still seems like yesterday.
>>>>> That long driveway
>>>>> now goes into space.
>>>>> We thought we'd live forever
>>>>> not dead and disgraced.
>>>>>
>>>>> Darkness is falling
>>>>> archived in a book.
>>>>> It really gets smaller
>>>>> the closer you look.
>>>>> Breathe deeply my darling
>>>>> smoke them if you have to.
>>>>> Shadowville Mythos...
>>>>> is on the last chapter.
>>>>>
>>>>> On Mulberry Drive
>>>>> now the hail's coming down.
>>>>> Taps on the umbrella
>>>>> as I'm walking around.
>>>>> I remember that fireplace
>>>>> I remember her smile.
>>>>> I remember Edgewood Park
>>>>> where we'd laugh for a while.
>>>>>
>>>>> In the living room
>>>>> I heard a ghost moan.
>>>>> As I talked with the Cavalier
>>>>> on a land line telephone.
>>>>> Relive every second
>>>>> these memories you've captured.
>>>>> Shadowville Mythos...
>>>>> is on the last chapter.
>>>>>
>>>>> -Will Dockery (3-27-23)
>>>>>
>>>>> ----
>>>>>
>>>>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>>>>
>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/on-mulberry-drive.html
>>> ?m=0
>>>>>
>>>>> ***
>>>>
>>>> I liked the song. The music enhances the lyrics. Mallard's guitar is
>>>> always catchy, and you held up your vocal end well.
>>>>
>>>> The ending was cool; reminded me of "Cinnamon Girl".
>>>
>>> Good afternoon, George Dance, any confirmation on when this poem will
>>> appear in the PP poetry blog?
>>
>> Great suggestion, NastyGoon. I'll be sure to do it just for you.
>>
>> Do you want "attribution" for the idea, so that it won't be
>> "plagiarism"? Well, fuck you; you're not getting any.
>
> Damn, that was a PJR level

Heads up, Cujo, PJR doesn't like either Nancy Gene or Pendragon/Lime so
he's likely to spank YOU for your months of slurping then.

HTH and HAND.

😏