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Subject: Re: Coil / Will Dockery
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Date: Fri, 28 Mar 2025 20:06:51 -0400
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> MummyChunk wrote:
> 
>> W.Dockery wrote:
>> On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:
>> 
>> 
>>> Miguel Sucio wrote:
>>> MummyChunk wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>> 
>>> Coil
>>> 
>>> This coil of pain
>>> memory burns
>>> with flashing image
>>> and haunting misses.
>>> 
>>> Distinct dream vision
>>> mixed up with consciousness
>>> train seems right on top of me
>>> conductor has an agenda.
>>> 
>>> Only the gods see beyond this veil
>>> I saw those eyes
>>> red blazing and shaking.
>>> 
>>> No time to think,
>>> no desire to.
>>> 
>>> There seems to be a wide awake
>>> slow ride
>>> conciousness carries
>>> stretches through these years
>>> these days... this minute.
>>> 
>>> As if the night could purify
>>> rather than corrupt
>>> my reptilian hands
>>> my repetition is signs.
>>> 
>>> -Will Dockery  (2003)
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Here is a Will Dockery gem
>>> 
>>> 
>>> What makes it a gem?  Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
>>> a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc
>>> 
>>> I just enjoyed reading it!
>>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.
>> 
>> 😏
>> 
>> 
>>> This is a response to the post seen at:
>>> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739
>> 
> 
> 
> 
> Good afternoon to you too.




Hello again.

😏 


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