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Subject: Re: Coil / Will Dockery
From: mummycullen@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (MummyChunk)
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2025 14:15:10 -0400
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> W.Dockery wrote:
> On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:
> 
> 
>> Miguel Sucio wrote:
>> MummyChunk wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>> 
>> Coil
>> 
>> This coil of pain
>> memory burns
>> with flashing image
>> and haunting misses.
>> 
>> Distinct dream vision
>> mixed up with consciousness
>> train seems right on top of me
>> conductor has an agenda.
>> 
>> Only the gods see beyond this veil
>> I saw those eyes
>> red blazing and shaking.
>> 
>> No time to think,
>> no desire to.
>> 
>> There seems to be a wide awake
>> slow ride
>> conciousness carries
>> stretches through these years
>> these days... this minute.
>> 
>> As if the night could purify
>> rather than corrupt
>> my reptilian hands
>> my repetition is signs.
>> 
>> -Will Dockery  (2003)
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Here is a Will Dockery gem
>> 
>> 
>> What makes it a gem?  Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
>> a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc
>> 
>> I just enjoyed reading it!
>> 
> 
> 
> Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.
> 
> 😏
> 
> 
>> This is a response to the post seen at:
>> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739
> 




Good afternoon to you too. 


This is a response to the post seen at:
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=683952998#683952998