Path: ...!weretis.net!feeder9.news.weretis.net!i2pn.org!i2pn2.org!.POSTED!not-for-mail From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery) Newsgroups: alt.arts.poetry.comments,rec.arts.poems Subject: Re: 17 Poems / Will Dockery Date: Sun, 15 Dec 2024 19:09:05 +0000 Organization: novaBBS Message-ID: <75ead1e31a2fc35807b6f2f8c0c6a7aa@www.novabbs.com> References: <43655baf-3547-4cb1-866f-f99015c8e995@googlegroups.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Injection-Info: i2pn2.org; logging-data="3020001"; mail-complaints-to="usenet@i2pn2.org"; posting-account="Vf9CM7g99yqfGvzEHTw0bhrjcIfvzYBBhUuRma0rLuQ"; User-Agent: Rocksolid Light X-Rslight-Site: $2y$10$Y1jU7/DKBOOjFqdYWJnr3u.fmTY.v5E56TT7wmokchgBEWAgYDpLa X-Rslight-Posting-User: acd0b3e3614eaa6f47211734e4cbca3bfd42bebc X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.0 Bytes: 2196 Lines: 48 Victor H. wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: > >> "Akmar Raggyhead" wrote in message >>> news:sp2atatjpl52ngo2ajq7d0v9rm8b107aqd@4ax.com... >>>> "Will Dockery" >>> wrote: > >>>>Poem Twelve in the "17 Poems" series: >>>> >>>>Soft Shadows >>>> >>>>Soft shadows of two men >>>>move and evolve. >>>> >>>>Commercialism is the word >>>>a fact of life >>>>sometimes very pleasant. >>>> >>>>I've been here before >>>>I will be here again. >>>> >>>>Roger that. >>>> >>>>Soft sound from the piano below >>>>shifts and flows >>>>from this dizzy height. >>>> >>>>It's hard to see anything >>>>in the effort to get everything. >>>> >>>>-Will Dockery >>>> >>>> >As always, useful comments & constructive criticism welcomed, trolls >>>> will >>>> >be >>>> >ignored. >>>> >>>> i dont like that one > >> Oh well, maybe the next poem. > > > Ha ha...! Good afternoon, Zod. 😏