Path: ...!eternal-september.org!feeder3.eternal-september.org!news.eternal-september.org!eternal-september.org!.POSTED!not-for-mail From: Cujo DeSockpuppet Newsgroups: alt.arts.poetry.comments,rec.arts.poems Subject: Re: "On Mulberry Drive" / Will Dockery & Brian Mallard Date: Fri, 7 Mar 2025 21:08:14 -0000 (UTC) Organization: Debunker Central - Give us a chance to ridicule you and your stupid beliefs. Lines: 135 Message-ID: References: <41868b29365b48f91bd4c64e7f0af6bf@www.novabbs.com> <344cfccb5aec47f5d9a8cc92d0de7ea8@www.novabbs.com> Injection-Date: Fri, 07 Mar 2025 22:08:14 +0100 (CET) Injection-Info: dont-email.me; posting-host="82bac89a7b95f5d985724c4de0a19375"; logging-data="3926575"; mail-complaints-to="abuse@eternal-september.org"; posting-account="U2FsdGVkX19ncYbhhAweddvqj1vDf4uNvhq/e4M9g84=" User-Agent: Xnews/2009.05.01 Cancel-Lock: sha1:x2KsoGt9cS/37tAiIVnuCZANPvM= Bytes: 5849 will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery) wrote in news:344cfccb5aec47f5d9a8cc92d0de7ea8@www.novabbs.com: > Cujo DeSockpuppet wrote: >> will.dockery@gmail.com (Will Dockery) wrote in >>>> news:41868b29365b48f91bd4c64e7f0af6bf@www.novabbs.com: >>>> >>>>> On Sat, 22 Feb 2025 20:18:29 +0000, Cujo DeSockpuppet wrote: >>>>>>>> Will Dockery wrote: >> >>>>>>>> Title: >>>>>>>> "On Mulberry Drive" (Draft) >>>>>>>> Creators: >>>>>>>> Will Dockery and Brian Mallard >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> https://youtube.com/watch?v=kE1pZ14gy4c&si=0z41kbwl6Sies98N >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On Fri, 21 Feb 2025 21:37:49 +0000, George J. Dance wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On Thu, 27 Jun 2024 2:41:41 +0000, Will-Dockery wrote: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> On Mulberry Drive >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> On Mulberry Drive >>>>>>>>> walking in the Spring rain. >>>>>>>>> Except for signs of a driveway >>>>>>>>> nothing else remains. >>>>>>>>> They took it all away >>>>>>>>> the house and the hill. >>>>>>>>> That spot we shared in '78 >>>>>>>>> all the love and thrills. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> Oblivion is coming >>>>>>>>> it's written in the stone. >>>>>>>>> It really starts out >>>>>>>>> on the day that you're born. >>>>>>>>> Live every second >>>>>>>>> dance what you've captured. >>>>>>>>> Shadowville Mythos... >>>>>>>>> is on the last chapter. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> On Mulberry Drive >>>>>>>>> on another mystery play. >>>>>>>>> Almost fifty years ago >>>>>>>>> still seems like yesterday. >>>>>>>>> That long driveway >>>>>>>>> now goes into space. >>>>>>>>> We thought we'd live forever >>>>>>>>> not dead and disgraced. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> Darkness is falling >>>>>>>>> archived in a book. >>>>>>>>> It really gets smaller >>>>>>>>> the closer you look. >>>>>>>>> Breathe deeply my darling >>>>>>>>> smoke them if you have to. >>>>>>>>> Shadowville Mythos... >>>>>>>>> is on the last chapter. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> On Mulberry Drive >>>>>>>>> now the hail's coming down. >>>>>>>>> Taps on the umbrella >>>>>>>>> as I'm walking around. >>>>>>>>> I remember that fireplace >>>>>>>>> I remember her smile. >>>>>>>>> I remember Edgewood Park >>>>>>>>> where we'd laugh for a while. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> In the living room >>>>>>>>> I heard a ghost moan. >>>>>>>>> As I talked with the Cavalier >>>>>>>>> on a land line telephone. >>>>>>>>> Relive every second >>>>>>>>> these memories you've captured. >>>>>>>>> Shadowville Mythos... >>>>>>>>> is on the last chapter. >>>>>>>>> -Will Dockery (3-27-23) >>>>>> >>>>>> Almost two years later, the spamming and talentless Dreckster is >>>>>> still not feeding the worms. Drat and double drat. >>>> >>>> Lack of response noted and ridiculed. >>>> >>>>>> Honestly, I'm surprised anyone playing on that unspeakable >>>>>> clusterfuck didn't demand their credits be listed as Alan >>>>>> Smithee. Even the drum machine doesn't want to be named. >>>> >>>> Lack of response noted and ridiculed. >>>> >>>>>>>>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog: >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/on-mulberry-drive >>>>>>> .h tm l? m=0 >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> *** >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> I liked the song. The music enhances the lyrics. Mallard's >>>>>>>> guitar is always catchy, and you held up your vocal end well. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The ending was cool; reminded me of "Cinnamon Girl". >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Good afternoon, George Dance, any confirmation on when this poem >>>>>>> will appear in the PP poetry blog? >>>>>> >>>>>> Remind me again which of you has the least talent? Dreckweasel, >>>>>> Dunce or the people who butchered the job on your hearing aids? >>>> >>>> Lack of response noted and ridiculed. >>>> >>>>> Obviously you fit that description, Cujo. >>>> >>>> I have many talents, one of them is making a living with my skills. >>>> How about you, Dreckster? >>> >>> Will you be posting a poem? >> >> I posted my poetry elsewhere. > > That doesn't work here though, where you're nothing but a jealous and > malicious troll, Cujo. What doesn't work is you, Dreckster. What's it like to go through like mooching from everyone as you've done for decades, Dreckweasel? Tell us all about it. You can even get The Town Drunk to help you with the big words. Don't be bashful, pissbum. -- "Post-editing someone's statement before replying to it is a sure sign that you have already lost the argument." - Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon.