Path: news.eternal-september.org!eternal-september.org!feeder3.eternal-september.org!fu-berlin.de!uni-berlin.de!not-for-mail From: ram@zedat.fu-berlin.de (Stefan Ram) Newsgroups: rec.arts.sf.written Subject: Maybe a logic slip Date: 18 Jun 2025 15:49:02 GMT Organization: Stefan Ram Lines: 10 Expires: 1 Jun 2026 11:59:58 GMT Message-ID: Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Trace: news.uni-berlin.de gIsCJxb1JLjp8awX9zd2Wgygfo4yML9BlfwmSdWODmvVfB Cancel-Lock: sha1:TsvyL5tZqp757F0O7vt9dBJg58g= sha256:2MPqUH3w6gYX3jxVOsm8+l1HOPfyzcGfajduWcjF9Uw= X-Copyright: (C) Copyright 2025 Stefan Ram. All rights reserved. Distribution through any means other than regular usenet channels is forbidden. It is forbidden to publish this article in the Web, to change URIs of this article into links, and to transfer the body without this notice, but quotations of parts in other Usenet posts are allowed. X-No-Archive: Yes Archive: no X-No-Archive-Readme: "X-No-Archive" is set, because this prevents some services to mirror the article in the web. But the article may be kept on a Usenet archive server with only NNTP access. X-No-Html: yes Content-Language: en-US The next story, "The Tree of Life" by Jennifer Rohn, is worth checking out too. Like "Down and Out," it is pretty sad, and the endings have a lot in common. So, I do not want to give away too much, but in "The Tree of Life" I think I spotted a kind of "logic slip", where something she tries really should not work - tragically enough! Still, it would not be a stretch to say the main character actually believes it might work, so the logic slip is not really baked into the story itself.