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From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Subject: Re: Coil. by Will Dockery
Date: Sun, 6 Apr 2025 02:30:55 +0000
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On Sat, 5 Apr 2025 19:48:56 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:

>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>>> MummyChunk wrote:
>>>> Will-Dockery wrote:
>>>>> MummyChunk wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> W.Dockery wrote:
>>>>>> On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Miguel Sucio wrote:
>>>>>>> MummyChunk wrote:
>>>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Coil
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> This coil of pain
>>>>>>> memory burns
>>>>>>> with flashing image
>>>>>>> and haunting misses.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Distinct dream vision
>>>>>>> mixed up with consciousness
>>>>>>> train seems right on top of me
>>>>>>> conductor has an agenda.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Only the Gods see beyond this veil
>>>>>>> I saw those eyes
>>>>>>> red blazing and shaking.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> No time to think,
>>>>>>> no desire to.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> There seems to be a wide awake
>>>>>>> slow ride
>>>>>>> conciousness carries
>>>>>>> stretches through these years
>>>>>>> these days... this minute.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> As if the night could purify
>>>>>>> rather than corrupt
>>>>>>> my reptilian hands
>>>>>>> my repetition is signs.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> -Will Dockery  (2003)
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Here is a Will Dockery gem
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> What makes it a gem?  Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
>>>>>>> a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> I just enjoyed reading it!
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 😏
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> This is a response to the post seen at:
>>>>>>> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739
>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Good afternoon to you too.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Hello again.
>
>>> Hi there 🥂
>
>> Good afternoon, MC
L
>
> Howdy 🤠
>
>Ll
> This is a response to the post seen at:
> http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=683952998#683952998

Great to see you tonight, MC.

😏