Path: news.eternal-september.org!eternal-september.org!feeder3.eternal-september.org!i2pn.org!i2pn2.org!.POSTED!not-for-mail From: will.dockery@gmail.com (W.Dockery) Newsgroups: rec.arts.poems,alt.arts.poetry.comments Subject: Re: PPB: Mars & Avril / George J. Dance Date: Tue, 28 Jan 2025 02:26:56 +0000 Organization: novaBBS Message-ID: References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Injection-Info: i2pn2.org; logging-data="1480005"; mail-complaints-to="usenet@i2pn2.org"; posting-account="Vf9CM7g99yqfGvzEHTw0bhrjcIfvzYBBhUuRma0rLuQ"; User-Agent: Rocksolid Light X-Rslight-Site: $2y$10$oQGgLYjH2cGv/4ONmu.G/.PLNQpVCxizrl3cGivF4SNgzFe7m/XRq X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.0 X-Rslight-Posting-User: acd0b3e3614eaa6f47211734e4cbca3bfd42bebc General-Zod wrote: > George J. Dance wrote: > >> Penny's Poetry Blog's featured poem for March: >> Mars & Avril, by George J. Dance > >> Mars the Brat marched in with the melting snow, >> blew around town, whistling at all the chicks >> and trying to lift up every second skirt >> [...] >> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2010/04/mars-avril-george-dance.html > > 4th read... still quite good... Agreed and seconded.